You can see where my preference lies by looking at my bulldog Stella in the picture above. She loves to enjoy the sunshine! The Best Pets: Cats Versus Dogs
There are cat people and there are dog people. Which team are you on. Watch the video above to help you decide Are you dog person or cat person? Tell us why with the hashtag #catsvsdogs http://freshpet.com Watch the Behind the Scenes video here to see how we did it! http://youtu.be/_HQ_UurbEZE We are on a mission – to bring the power of fresh, real food to dogs and cats. And we’re committed to doing so in ways that are good for our pets, for people ... www.youtube.com In this week’s blog post, state which are better pets, cats or dogs. Use 2 – 3 examples to support your argument. Think a different animal makes the best pet? Make an argument for another kind an animal. All opinions should be supported by your experiences and/or research from a reliable source. Reminder of Blog Instructions 1) Read, reflect, think, discuss with parents, siblings, friends the blog post found on the class website blog page 2) Write a thoughtful response ensuring you have met the criteria (see above in the header of this page) 3) Wait for someone to post. Reply to their post (see the reply button on example below) giving them feedback using the criteria found in the banner (top of page) on Blog page 4) Once you have received feedback from a peer you are to revise your original. Click on the reply button under the person who gave you feedback and submit your new blog comment Notes: The process will take 2 to 3 days to complete. Day 1 – respond to post, day 2 give feedback , day 3 revise (this can be completed much earlier than over three days). Only one person is to respond to a blog post – no duplicates. If someone has given feedback scroll down and choose someone else.
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a_personOk
12/5/2020 08:34:59 am
1st animal Cats:
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Moaning Myrtle
12/5/2020 09:38:58 am
That sounded great! It was a very strong argument. I would just go back and check for little things like missing words and capitals in between sentences.
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a_personOk
13/5/2020 09:03:01 am
1st animal Cats:
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Moaning Myrtle
12/5/2020 09:34:55 am
1. Dogs
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chicken priest
12/5/2020 09:48:22 am
This sounds great! but you may want to look back to see if you have over 3 examples for your pets.
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Moaning Myrtle
12/5/2020 11:18:08 am
With Feedback,
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chicken priest
12/5/2020 09:38:03 am
1. Cats: I prefer cats a lot more than skin renders. First of all Cats are more independent and go "WOOF WOOF WOOF!" Second of all I've never had a cat rip off my flesh before unlike dogs, mainly because most of them more zen and dogs are very aggressive. Third of all when your just walking by a house and waving to the person from 30 ft away cats don't rush out of a bush knock you over giving you a mild concussion, it's dogs! I'm okay with golden retrievers and some other dogs but not pit bulls and smaller ones. Cats are also very cute and can be cuddly, (if they want).
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a_personOk
13/5/2020 09:05:30 am
That was pretty good. Very expressive but you need to check a few capitals at the start of cats but that is it.
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owoster
12/5/2020 11:16:30 am
1:Cats
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Mr.Obama
12/5/2020 12:50:30 pm
I think this is really good. Make sure you’re reading everything over out loud making sure everything makes sense. I liked al the examples you included. Maybe when your talking about your fish I would add different examples to make it stand out from the rest because a lot of people did fish. Overall I think it’s really good.
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owoster
14/5/2020 11:09:01 am
feedback post:
It’s Me!!
12/5/2020 11:29:18 am
1. Dogs
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Someone.in.mr.stewarts.class
15/5/2020 11:47:14 am
This is really good I would just add one or two more reasons for why dogs are good pets to have.
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It’s Me!!!
15/5/2020 01:04:32 pm
1. Dogs
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person
12/5/2020 12:33:50 pm
1. Dogs
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milomarley
13/5/2020 02:32:30 pm
It is really good! I think you could add some more triple-scoop words but other than that you did a really good job.
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person
14/5/2020 02:15:56 pm
1. Dogs
Mr. beast
12/5/2020 12:34:50 pm
In my opinion I think cats are a Better pet than a dog because. cats are quiet calm And are Easy to take care of and nice to be around. they are really soft and nice to pet They are also really good at catching rodents. And Are more affordable than Dogs
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Person
12/5/2020 03:34:25 pm
This looks great, but make sure to add more details and example, also be sure to add 2 pet.
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person
12/5/2020 03:35:22 pm
And make sure to check your grammar.
mr. beast
13/5/2020 11:20:19 am
In my opinion I think cats are better than dogs. Because cats are quiet calm easy to take care of pets. and dogs are loud hard to take care of pets So this is just my opinion.
Mr.Obama
12/5/2020 12:45:02 pm
1. Cats
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toastyyy
12/5/2020 01:15:28 pm
this is really good, i like the examples you put for both cats and fish. Maybe you can try to add how many times you have to feed the fish each day or how can it live for a few years. Other than that its really good.
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Mr.Obama
13/5/2020 10:21:11 pm
1.Cats
toastyyy
12/5/2020 01:04:38 pm
1. cats
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Rubeus Hagrid 82
12/5/2020 02:59:24 pm
Your reasons are valid, but go through and look for some lower case letters that should be capital,as well as, grammar and spelling mistakes.
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toastyyy
14/5/2020 10:09:58 am
1. Cats
Rubeus Hagrid
12/5/2020 02:51:51 pm
I think dogs are the best pet. I think this because they are playful, they are snuggly, they mainly don't scratch you or bite you. You give each other exercise by going for walks or runs with them. They are always excited to see you, even if you've only been gone for five minutes. They like to keep you company and are good sleepers.
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milomarley
12/5/2020 03:24:30 pm
1. Cats
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its shy
14/5/2020 02:44:45 pm
I think this a great argument my only suggestion is to maybe add a bit more detail to the fish paragraph or maybe some personally experience with these pets.
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milomarley
14/5/2020 04:28:57 pm
1. Cats
bluetrooper1127
12/5/2020 09:54:26 pm
1.Dog
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Hagrid21
13/5/2020 09:02:31 am
I think you made a great argument on which is better you gave lots of good detail and examples I would just check if there’s any where you have run on sentences
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bluetrooper1127
14/5/2020 06:16:46 pm
1. dogs
Someone.in.mr.stewarts.class
12/5/2020 10:49:02 pm
Dogs
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can't think of a name
13/5/2020 09:09:08 am
This is a great start! Could you add more reasons as to why dogs and fish are the best pets to have?
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Someone.in.mr.stewarts.class
14/5/2020 09:29:06 pm
Dogs
Hagrid21
13/5/2020 08:59:53 am
Dogs in my opinion are better pets because they are very loyal to people they won’t leave your side if you take care of them and feed them. my second reason is they are always ready to do stuff like going for a walk or to play around. Third reason is they can listen very well and can be your best friend
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LADodgers024
13/5/2020 09:32:24 am
You gave three good reasons at why you like dogs better but maybe add a bit more detail. And you have a few grammar mistakes but overall this is really good
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Mr.Obama
13/5/2020 10:33:41 pm
This is a great start! But I would definitely make it longer. Maybe add some more detail. Try and make your examples stand out from everyone else’s. Remember to read it back and maybe even get a parent to read it over. Also don’t forget to do the second part. Good jobb
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Hagrid21
13/5/2020 11:19:01 pm
1. Dogs
cant think of a name
13/5/2020 09:07:21 am
1.Dogs
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what3
14/5/2020 08:49:04 am
This is pretty good. But can you add a little more explanation why having a horse is a good investment?
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LADodgers024
13/5/2020 09:29:16 am
I like both cats and dogs a lot but if I had to choose one, it would be dogs. This is because when I'm watching a show, my dog will always come and snuggle with us where is my cat does her own thing. My cat lets me pet her for a certain amount of time and then she is gone where is my dog would let me for ever basically.
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potatowithlimbs
13/5/2020 05:45:03 pm
I agree that dogs are better. Your post is good, but there are a few grammar errors (where is should be where as).
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-imabottt-
13/5/2020 10:32:00 am
In my opinion, dogs are better than cats. My dog is so affectionate towards me and my family even though he was abused. That to me shows that dogs can mentally recover easily. My old cat didn't. She was abused as well and she didn't like being pet. she would bite or scratch me and my family every time we would walk by. she wasn't potty trained and she would pee on the wall instead of her litter box. We gave her away for those reasons. I also feel that dogs do help people a lot more than cats. All cats do is lay around and sleep. Dogs are more active and fun to play with and take to places. Sure cats are really cute and can be cuddly at times, but never the ones I've had.
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Parsley
13/5/2020 01:57:25 pm
This is detailed and good! I think maybe you could change the more on the negative points because it’s a positive argument?? Idk I could be ring lol
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Parsleyahhhhh
13/5/2020 11:21:57 am
Dogs
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bluetrooper1127
13/5/2020 12:05:56 pm
This is really good. Maybe you can add some more about these cool pets like what you need to buy to let them survive and stuff but it's very good.
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potatowithlimbs
13/5/2020 05:49:00 pm
I think that dogs are better. They are better because they are more loyal. They are also more social and friendly. I haven't met a grown cat that I have gotten along with, but I haven't met a dog that I didn't like.
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Someone.in.mr.stewarts.class
13/5/2020 08:39:45 pm
This is a really good start, you should just make an argument for a second animal.
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what3
14/5/2020 08:57:03 am
I think dogs are better because the are passionate animals and you can do lots of things with them. They can be good service animals or very good detection dogs depending on the breed. The can also be very good for company.
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can't think of a name
14/5/2020 09:51:26 am
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24/11/2020 04:15:28 pm
Imagine being in a world without cats? It would be a little less fun and wonderful. Cats have their own way of contributing happiness and life not just to the planet but also to the worlds of humans.
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